![]() Sometimes things get wilder than I expected, so the writing process can be a bit wonked. Sometimes those I intended to get together, really don’t gel. By working through the characters interaction. Then I let everything in the middle unfold as it comes to me. I know where I want to begin, and I work out where I want to end first. When I write my novels I generally do character lists and bios. Or the choice to not advance a relationship shouldn’t be penalized. It’s a collection and each girl should be worthy to collect. ![]() A harem isn’t about boinking every girl just because she’s there. For me the graphics aren’t as important as they’re supposed to be as polished/attractive in order to hook a player base, and you’re right that it’s a definite continuity error to make the MC and sister distant to Anna in the first bit, and then espouse a deeper relationship in the next chapter. Thanks for another comprehensive review Vidodat. well done so far and keep up the good work □ it should be possible for the player to not pursue her romantically.Īll in all i liked it so far, specially visually and the sister’s character is really adorable. Also i really strongly advice the devs and writers to consider what i wrote above about Anna the neighbour. I would advice the writer and devs to write down at least the major points of the plot to the end, to avoid confusion during the long development time. Which in this case they do, at least to stick around and see in which direction the story and the game develops. This is normally a deal breaker for me personally, if the other aspects of the game don’t compensate for that. The reason for this, is that you can not later punish the MC/Player for the choices that they didn’t have a say in making them. which is not a good thing in a VN of this type. I personally tried to avoid it, but the story pushes it on you and is linear in this regard. ![]() You will end up getting sexual with her, want it or not. In this case the player has no say in getting close to Anna. Generally speaking i always find it problematic and a bad idea to push a relationship, be it romantic or sexual, on the player. In chapter 1 it seems that the MC and his Sis aren’t that familiar with the neighbour Anna, but in chapter 2 suddenly we are told that the MC knows her since he was a child and she’s kind a mother figure for him. there are some confusions in the story though. Writing is all in all fine in my opinion, including the characters and development. ![]() Story technics it’s not bad so far, but currently there’s not much story to talk about. Generally it’s visually an apealing game and the soundtracks fit very nicely into the visual aspect of the game. The most positive aspect of it in my eyes are the beautiful visuals and beautiful character designs. So far i liked it all in all and it has definitely potential to turn into a good game. Well it is in the early stage of development and there is not much of a content so far (version 0.8) for a proper review. ![]()
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